Small suggestion I just noticed: In the second to last frame, maybe carry the tip of the nose that is cut off by the frame to break through the frame before it... I'm just not sure how bad of an idea it is compositionally to cut off the nose like that. It didn't bug me when I first saw the page, though, so I don't know how serious a concern this actually is....
You have such beautiful, detailed linework. I realy wish I could attempt to draw like that. I need bigger paper. Better talent. You're awesome. Favorited and watched, my dear.